As
most of the poems in Aimless Love: New
and Selected Poems were previously published in other collections, which
have already been reviewed by others, I will limit the focus of this review to
Billy Collins’ fifty-one new poems.
I respect Mr.
Collins, integrated his poems in college literature classes I taught, and
recently enjoyed listening to a 2002 recording of his guest appearance on NPR’s
“Fresh Air.” Listening to his poems (all poems are meant to be read aloud to
fully appreciate them) is really the way to go with Collins, and I think I
would have enjoyed this book far more if I had listened to it, rather than
reading it. If you’re unfamiliar with Collins, treat yourself to a few minutes
of listening to him read his poetry by searching YouTube or watching his
“Everyday Moments, Caught in Time” at http://www.ted.com/talks/billy_collins_everyday_moments_caught_in_time#
Collins’ new
poems are likeable. But most are rather light, like snacks: a pleasure to eat
at the time, but not terribly filling. Where the poet shines is in his humorous
poems that go beyond just the wit or the laugh to say something broader and
deeper. My favorite (and one he reads on the TED Talk) is “To My Favorite
17-Year-Old High School Girl.” Here he compares a typical American teen to Judy
Garland, Joan of Arc, Franz Schubert, and others who were quite accomplished at
a relatively young age. Collins ends the poem as follows:
Frankly,
who cares if Annie Oakley was a crack shot at 15
or
if Maria Callas debuted as Tosca at 17?
We
think you are special by just being you,
playing
with your food and staring into space.
By
the way, I lied about Schubert doing the dishes,
but
that doesn’t mean he never helped out
around the house.
The poem is
funny on the surface, but I believe that Collins was after something deeper:
the disconnect between the standards, abilities, and expectations of the youth
of the past and the Millennials of today.
Collins is an
observant guy, as most poets and writers are, and turns his observations of
waiters, Cheerios, eating apples, and other mundane things into poems. Some
poems, though, seem like he took his notes of something he observed and merely
broke them into stanzas, as opposed to using a poet’s tools to craft a poem
that succeeds on many levels. Read “My Papa’s Waltz” by Theodore Roethke to see
a poem that could not be anything but a poem. Turning it into prose deflates
it, while turning some of Collins’ poems into prose really doesn’t change them.
Here is the
opening stanza to Roethke’s “My Papa’s Waltz”:
The whiskey on
your breath
Could make a small boy dizzy;
But I hung on like death:
Such waltzing was not easy.
Could make a small boy dizzy;
But I hung on like death:
Such waltzing was not easy.
And here it is
written as prose: “The whiskey on your breath could make a small boy dizzy; but
I hung on like death: such waltzing was not easy.”
Here is the
opening stanza to Collins’ “Dining Alone”:
I
would rather eat at the bar,
but
such behavior is regarded
by
professionals as a form of denial,
so
here I am seated alone
at
a table with a white tablecloth
attended
by an elderly waiter with no name—
ideal
conditions for dining alone
according
to the connoisseurs of this minor talent.
And
here it is written as prose: “I would rather eat at the bar, but such behavior
is regarded
by
professionals as a form of denial, so here I am seated alone at a table with a
white tablecloth
attended
by an elderly waiter with no name—ideal conditions for dining alone according
to the connoisseurs of this minor talent.”
It’s
not just that the former poem rhymes and the latter doesn’t (for poems don’t
have to rhyme, of course), it’s that there are so many elements—the rhythm
purposefully matching that of a waltz, the hyperbole of whiskey strong enough
to make one dizzy, the comparison of the boy clinging to his father’s shirt to
that of death’s grip—that “My Papa’s Waltz” must
take form as a poem. “Dining Alone” does not. A poem such as this makes me
wonder if it had been submitted to a publisher under the name of an unknown
instead of by Collins, would it have been published?
The collection
also includes poems that are nostalgic in tone or cover the subject of aging, which
makes sense for a man now in his seventies. The collection, though, ends on a
heavy note, “The Names,” a poem written for 9/11 victims. In addition to it
being out of step with the tone of the preponderance of the new poems, it was written
in 2002, so it’s unclear why it appears in the “New Poems” section.
As a poet
myself, though, I certainly appreciate this “people’s poet,” not only for his
ability to make poetry accessible and likeable, but his ability to actually
make a living writing poems. Collins
certainly makes one’s first foray into poetry an easy one, which opens the door
for readers to explore other poems and poets. And that’s a good thing.